I know when we grow much and much older we become clueless and how the brain starts to function childlike and repetition of their past experience as a child has come up to the dinner table with the phrase starting with "when I was a kid..." Furthermore, half the time she is angry screaming and roaring , like a dragon smashing buildings with fire coming from its mouth. I was mostly focus when I broke the news to her of my very first boyfriend, it feels as if the alarms in her brain have turned on to over drive. On a final note, she is very family oriented, old age has hit her with speaking of the past and childlike behaviors, and finally breaking the ice to your parents of first relationships.
I really like the choice in observation. I also love the way you describe her when she is "screaming and roaring" because it puts voice into your writing.
ReplyDeleteI really like the line " I was mostly focus when I broke the news to her of my very first boyfriend, it feels as if the alarms in her brain have turned on to over drive." It is a really nice line to use and its very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you compared the persons actions to a dragon. It was creative and detailed. They way you talk about the lady is thoughful and very observant. Good blog.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your blog. I love the voice that you put into it! Makes it so much more fun to read, and it really kept my interested to keep reading on!
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